Writing storys

In my Class Room , Room 5 we have been doing story writing.

My story's about a girl named Coraline who really doesn't like her life she thinks it's boring and she really wants to be a pop star.

One night when she is just going to go on a boring trip with the Stevens family , she sees a shooting star she wishes to be a pop star in the morning she wakes up to a pop star life but when she realises how important her life really is to her.

Then she wishes on a wishing star and goes back to her real life and is really happy and not bored.